tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5089920388306391810.post5383380370007911080..comments2023-10-22T04:06:50.440-04:00Comments on Random Interruptions: Should I Stay, or Should I Go?Heather Murphyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11847855601653718033noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5089920388306391810.post-18748456523600327682012-06-04T04:34:20.637-04:002012-06-04T04:34:20.637-04:00Great use of all the prompt words and I love the l...Great use of all the prompt words and I love the lines to describe her feelings for him: Ryan would flash a smile at her every once in a while, with a sparkle in his eyes. As he did, she felt butterflies in her stomach.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5089920388306391810.post-86398151018279414122012-06-03T23:27:34.267-04:002012-06-03T23:27:34.267-04:00You used all the prompt words and you captured you...You used all the prompt words and you captured young love. The only thing I can say is that a little more tension might make the yes-no more provocative and interesting. <br /><br />LindaScheherazadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08906467791904395295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5089920388306391810.post-14906996161023655662012-06-03T23:07:43.245-04:002012-06-03T23:07:43.245-04:00Oh, the pangs of young love. Nice emotion and desc...Oh, the pangs of young love. Nice emotion and description. Passion is such an important aspect in romantic writing.Michael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5089920388306391810.post-40191064381740002842012-06-03T07:24:32.797-04:002012-06-03T07:24:32.797-04:00Sunday May 3rd, 2012
Hi Heather,
I'm back to s...Sunday May 3rd, 2012<br />Hi Heather,<br />I'm back to say thank you for visiting my post. Since you asked what will happen to Carola and Cedric, I will try to write a sequel and put it at the end of the same post.<br />I'll be back to tell you when it is ready.<br />Best wishes,<br />AnnaAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17926688000745346961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5089920388306391810.post-75483511139599849852012-06-02T21:38:51.549-04:002012-06-02T21:38:51.549-04:00Dear Heather,
Young or old, sweet love is a beauti...Dear Heather,<br />Young or old, sweet love is a beautiful thing. You are a great story teller. These emotions exist in many hearts. Thanks for sharing dear.The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5089920388306391810.post-39666936105420432382012-06-02T18:46:33.341-04:002012-06-02T18:46:33.341-04:00The characters in your story are believable, and y...The characters in your story are believable, and your story feels like the way life is. You have certainly woven the feeling of indecision well into your text.<br /><br />Best wishes,<br />Anna<br /><br /><a href="http://annas-adornments.blogspot.se/2012/06/yes-no-oh-all-right-then-romantic.html" rel="nofollow">Anna's RFWers Challenge No 37 'Yes, No, oh, alright then.'</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17926688000745346961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5089920388306391810.post-71210635548562323432012-06-02T18:20:41.029-04:002012-06-02T18:20:41.029-04:00Oh I liked how one decision naturally brought up a...Oh I liked how one decision naturally brought up another, and another. That is such the way of life. I liked how you integrated all the words to, they felt natural to the character and the situations.<br /><br />Thank you for posting for RFW this week. Have a great weekend, and I will see you again on Monday for the Voice blogfest.<br /><br />.......dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5089920388306391810.post-16604860175344970862012-06-02T18:16:36.075-04:002012-06-02T18:16:36.075-04:00Very clever Heather! You managed to include all th...Very clever Heather! You managed to include all the prompts. I liked the way you captured the uncertainty of young love :)Charmaine Clancyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18059559142070140041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5089920388306391810.post-87717312092729132332012-06-02T13:59:22.569-04:002012-06-02T13:59:22.569-04:00Hi, Heather. Welcome to RFW. I'd say you are s...Hi, Heather. Welcome to RFW. I'd say you are spot on with the theme. I love the way you introduced the characters. Well done. I look forward to reading more of your work.Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5089920388306391810.post-59373641583186516602012-06-01T21:45:49.801-04:002012-06-01T21:45:49.801-04:00Hi Heather! I'm glad you gave the RFW prompt a...Hi Heather! I'm glad you gave the RFW prompt a go - you've done well. Love the scene and the great musical reference which works perfectly for the prompt. Nice use of the prompt words throughout. It's always sweet reading about young love and its conflicts.<br /><br />Don't forget to pop over to the RFW site Monday to vote for your favourite story. You'll find a poll in the sidebar.<br /><br />DeniseDenise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5089920388306391810.post-89683024294878242122012-06-01T16:37:15.141-04:002012-06-01T16:37:15.141-04:00Nice writing on young love. It has me wanting to k...Nice writing on young love. It has me wanting to know how things turned out between them.Gossip_Grlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06603645371306284338noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5089920388306391810.post-78063906759569943152012-06-01T12:29:45.288-04:002012-06-01T12:29:45.288-04:00You even got a song title in there. I hope everyon...You even got a song title in there. I hope everyone butts out and Ryan and Monica can get together without anymore 'help'.Tamera Brosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10936689822460368906noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5089920388306391810.post-27448192049464014572012-06-01T12:04:29.185-04:002012-06-01T12:04:29.185-04:00we all remember days like this--nice writing:)we all remember days like this--nice writing:)Lynn Proctorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16349867270815243053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5089920388306391810.post-78234107195327576962012-06-01T10:54:43.773-04:002012-06-01T10:54:43.773-04:00Very true to life.Very true to life.Sallyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14090018804016223955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5089920388306391810.post-75981068708215272722012-06-01T10:53:27.649-04:002012-06-01T10:53:27.649-04:00Great use of the prompt! I really hope things work...Great use of the prompt! I really hope things work out between her and Ryan. :)Cherie Reichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16663147386014122939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5089920388306391810.post-63730082764297807752012-06-01T09:32:34.022-04:002012-06-01T09:32:34.022-04:00She got her opportunity. And probably didn't m...She got her opportunity. And probably didn't miss curfew either.Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5089920388306391810.post-35965481147798328672012-06-01T08:42:32.634-04:002012-06-01T08:42:32.634-04:00Hi,
Nice take on "should I go or should I st...Hi,<br /><br />Nice take on "should I go or should I stay" and indecision of letting one's true feelings be known to the one person who could mean so much, if only ... ;) <br /><br />best<br />FFrancine Howarthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02326542867876257042noreply@blogger.com