This is my first attempt at 100WCGU at Julie's Place. What is that, you might ask?
"This is a weekly challenge for those who are over 16 and enjoy challenging themselves with writing. Each week you are given a prompt. It may be a few connected words, a selection of individual words or a picture.
You have 100 words (or the number that have been set for that week) plus the prompt to write a creative piece. If you have a blog, post it on your blog then link the URL of the post (not the blog) to the link that is at the bottom of that week’s challenge. Make sure there is a link to The Head’s Office as well. You can right click the badge above and copy the image URL into your post."
You can find the link for this week's challenge here.
This week's prompt is: ...being clear is essential to...
Here is my entry:
My head being clear is
essential to my sanity
When my thoughts are jumbled, my life is jumbled
Pulled to and fro
Do I stay or do I go?
I squint in the fog to find my way
Suffocation threatens, I’m weighted down
Just when all hope is lost
The clouds break free
The sun shines bright
Illuminating my brain
As if thawing my thoughts
Clarity resumes
Vision becomes sharp
Sanity returns
I love how you lead us through one mood into another just as the imagery suggest clouds into sunshine. Bravo!
ReplyDeleteGreat piece, love it! I sometimes wish we could 'download' our minds to free up extra space.
ReplyDeleteExcellent. I am afraid I am at the bottom of a well these days.
ReplyDeleteWOW Great posting and definitely true.
ReplyDeleteExcellent - and so true! Some days my brain just refuses to co-operate and the next day it's as though the sun has come out! :-)
ReplyDeleteI can really relate to the ideas in this poem...though I've needed a bit of help breaking up the clouds. Rock on, Heather!
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Great 100 words Heather. I felt the tension. Have a great weekend.
ReplyDeleteI like your linking your mental clarity with a clear sky.
ReplyDeleteExcellent piece, very well written. x
ReplyDeleteNicely done! Oh what a good day when the "sun shines bright" and "sanity returns."
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